Tuesday 6 June 2017

Midland Line Cross Country

34 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Lily from SHS I love seeing your slide of your running I can just imagine it.I remember doing my running I made it into zones does your school go to zones. Thanks for sharing Lily

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  3. Hi my name is Tamani and I am from South Hornby School. I really like how you put in the first part of your writing that it was muddy and a little bit rainy. I think I might have seen some of the kids from your school. Maybe next time you could have told me where your zones were.

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  4. Hi my name is Nikora and I am from South Hornby School. I like how you put what kind of weather like muddy or rainy. Maybe next you could get some of your spelling right.

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  5. Kia ora Room 5,
    Thank you for sharing the photos and stories from cross country. I LOVED cross country when I was at school and even now I love running on tracks way more than I love running on the road. I don't mind if it's muddy and raining either! There are so many great describing words in your stories - it made me visualise what you were feeling and doing in my head as I read them. Well done. Did you do lots of training for the cross country? I am sure you all had heaps of fun!
    Tania

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  6. Hi my name is Talia, I am from South Hornby School, I loved reading about your cross country. Im a bit confused on if one person wrote this or lots of people. Other than that your slide was very interesting.

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  8. Hi my name is Tai and I am from South Hornby School. I really like how you put in the first part of your writing what the weather was like. And i think i might have seen some of them before at zones.

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  9. Hi, my name is Kristie and I am from South Hornby School! It looks from the pictures that you guys ran your hearts out! When I ran my school's cross country I was bombed out because I definitely did my best. Maybe if you want to do something like this again you could put the names with the picture so I can say for example "This kid's writing is amazing!" but with their name! Where did you go for your cross country? How long did you have to run? Who was first?

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  10. Hi Junior Hub!
    I'm Layla from South Hornby School. I LOVE cross country at school. If you come close to first place do you enter Zones? This reminds me of all the times I go outside for a run. Maybe you could change the color of each slide to make it more artistic.
    Good Job!

    Layla
    SHS

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  11. Kia Ora my name is Phoebe, I go to South Hornby School. I love how you were very descriptive and had lots of language features. Maybe next time you could use SISIMO Sight, Sound and motion. This reminds me of when I did my cross country and it was a little bit wet and very bumpy. Other wise you did an amazing job. Make sure you keep up the astonishing work.

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  12. Nǐ hǎo it is Kadyn from South Hornby School.
    I like the Cross Country because you can get heaps of energy away and it can keep you fit.
    South Hornby School has done Cross Country at Kyle Park, and it super wavy and bumpy around the outside.
    I came sixth place, and I went into zones but I didn't want to go to zones, because I knew I was probably going to be last.
    I like the slide show that you have made I would love to look back at it but that would be awesome if you use more wow words so I will be amazed with it.
    Keep up the fantastic work.

    Kadyn Raxworthy
    South Hornby School
    Wednesday 2nd August 2017

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  13. Hi I'm Lily, I'm from South Hornby School I like how you were so descriptive about cross country. I remember doing my cross country it was good. I had stitches in my hips we had to run around Kile Park. Who came first out of the girls and boys? Also did you get sore. I for sure know that my stitches hurt.

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  14. coming last is no big deal because you still did the race and finished well done.

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  15. hi my name is Oliver from south hornby school
    i think that you guy did amazing and that you did your best keep trying and never give up. thinking that you guys were rain is not good and some of you guys fell is bad but keep trying bye.

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  16. hi my name is Sarah I like how you worked it out and run as your running like an cheetah you are so fast well done you have done gret on cross country

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  17. great work how hard did you practice? besides that well done on cross country we did cross country

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  18. Hello my name is Keren and I am from Wesley primary school I am 9 years old I'm just popping up on people's school blog and school one's and looking at your work you are so good at cross country because some people didn't do it but you still took part and I like that because you are so fast like a cheetah and you know I don't like cross country but I will take part because it school and we are learning so we always take part of thing I like how you were wearing running shoes because last time at my old school I was wearing boots so ya I really love your cross country

    by keren rm4 Wesley primary school

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  19. have fun playing sport

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  20. Hi South Hornby and Wesley School.
    Thanks for all your great comments on our cross country post.
    We have not been posting on our class blog lately because we have been focusing on our individual blogs. It would be great if you could have a look at some of our posts and give us some feedback! Our names are down the left hand side of the class blog.
    Thanks!
    Room 5

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  21. HI my name john I like all of your stuff from jhon

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  22. nice work hop you know more work

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  23. hi my name is Phi-AN i am from wesley primary school.i read your guys work and i thought u guys did really well.Well done!!!

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  24. nice fun run but we are

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  25. Hi my nae is Sarah and I go to Wesley Primary School.I loved how you talked about what you were feeling and how it was cold,muddy and the rocks that you described when you ran on them.

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  26. Hi my name is john you have done lots of work have a good time from jhon

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  27. hi my name is Isabel and i go Wesley primary school and great job on your work

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  28. Hi my name is faith and i come from Wesley primary school and my rm number is rm 4 i would want to give yous a great claws for your great work yous have done good job rm 5-Faith

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  29. omg you guys are talking about cross country cool love it lol

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  30. Hi my name is Genesis I am a student in room 4 at Wesley Primary School. I really like the photos and did you guys win?

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  31. like that you are so so smart

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  32. Hi My name is Sopheighra from Wesley primary school i'm in room 4 my friend Phi-An also went to cross country she was really excited but tired at the same time she was so pumped

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  33. like our of our work from noah

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  34. Oh hello there I am a student form Wesley Primary School. in our school for fitness we practice running so we can get ready for the CROSS COUNTRY ! if you are ready for the next Cross country comment down below.

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